Okay, now it's Stringer's turn.
*nudgepokekick*
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Ball Point Pen
Posts: 1112 (Jan 30, 2009 10:12 PM) Goose Feather Quill |
You're a real gone kid
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Finger in the Sand
Posts: 18 (Jan 30, 2009 11:28 PM) |
Okay, okay! I'm going to be out of town for a day or two, but I'll try to get to it on Sunday/Monday or thereabouts.
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Finger in the Sand
Posts: 18 (Feb 1, 2009 4:28 AM) |
Done! *collapses*
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Grendelvs |
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Ball Point Pen
Posts: 1128 (Feb 1, 2009 10:00 PM) Ball Point Pen |
Once Upon a Time?
that smacks of backstory . . . which Raz is exceedingly good at. heh. |
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Ball Point Pen
Posts: 1112 (Feb 2, 2009 11:26 PM) Goose Feather Quill |
*cracks knuckles*
EDIT AFTER THE FACT: 'Ave some o' that, then. It went well over the 600 words, but that's exposition for you. Well... that's my exposition for you. You're a real gone kid
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Finger in the Sand
Posts: 18 (Feb 3, 2009 3:00 AM) |
...
That. Is. BRILLIANT. There are about a bajillion different ways that is awesome. I - I think I need a sit-down. I can't wait to see where this goes next. *brain is running at full tilt* |
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Ball Point Pen
Posts: 1128 (Feb 3, 2009 12:18 PM) Ball Point Pen |
see, and there i was, thinking to myself, "there's no way we'll be able to tie all these random, loose threads together coherently. not at
all."
i was wrong. and now, i have to think of something that just won't fucking fit. ever. |
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Ball Point Pen
Posts: 1112 (Feb 4, 2009 5:21 AM) Goose Feather Quill |
All credit to Mr William Golding, whose story I ass-raped.
see, and there i was, thinking to myself, "there's no way we'll be able to tie all these random, loose threads together coherently. not at all."Had to be done sooner or later. Literary spring cleaning, as it were. I mean, if we keep throwing in random plot threads and mysterious loose ends without ever tying them all up, we might as well be writing the next season of Lost. and now, i have to think of something that just won't fucking fit. ever. But there's a monster out there. You and monsters? Fuggedabowdit. (Apologies for the lame attempt at Soprano-Speak. It's been a long day.) You're a real gone kid
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Ball Point Pen
Posts: 1112 (Feb 10, 2009 2:52 AM) Goose Feather Quill |
"Argh," said Lance. "These ropes are starting to chafe."
You're a real gone kid
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Ball Point Pen
Posts: 1112 (Feb 13, 2009 11:24 PM) Goose Feather Quill |
"Hey," said Eddie, wiping the sweat from his brow. "We've been walking for days. Just how big is this Garden?"
"Not that big," said Ianeira, massaging her aching tentacles. "We're walking in circles because nobody will get off their arse and write another episode. Come on," she added with a sigh. "Once more round the cliffs, then." "Aw, man..." Eddie groaned, plodding wearily after her. You're a real gone kid
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Ball Point Pen
Posts: 1128 (Feb 15, 2009 3:39 AM) Ball Point Pen |
nyar.
Dark Tomorrow - online writings of Rob Pegler and Thom
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Ball Point Pen
Posts: 1112 (Feb 15, 2009 4:39 AM) Goose Feather Quill |
Thank god for that. As soon as Ianeira started massaging her tentacles, I thought "If someone doesn't step in soon, we're on the slippery slope to
some kind of perverse gender-reversed hentai."
You're a real gone kid
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Finger in the Sand
Posts: 13 (Feb 16, 2009 5:58 AM) |
Brainbleach. Now. Please.
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Mr Razorz |
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Ball Point Pen
Posts: 1112 (Feb 16, 2009 6:07 AM) Goose Feather Quill |
Damn your brainbleach! Write!
Write, damn you! *flourishes dramatically, wishing I had a cape*
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Grendelvs |
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Ball Point Pen
Posts: 1128 (Feb 21, 2009 10:20 PM) Ball Point Pen |
. . . and it's only been 6 days. 13 days holds the record in the "nothing posted in the new Flat Robin" category.
Dark Tomorrow - online writings of Rob Pegler and Thom
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Ball Point Pen
Posts: 1112 (Mar 1, 2009 4:08 AM) Goose Feather Quill |
Well, it's 14 days now.
Anybody? 
Sometimes there's a line you just don't cross. And I go like this:
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Ball Point Pen
Posts: 1112 (Mar 15, 2009 2:13 AM) Goose Feather Quill |
Stringer, you bloody legend!
Awesome stuff. The Legend of Rolph takes shape. And it makes me eternally happy when Americans use phrases like "buggered off". Magic. Good lord, you used "pack of fags" as well. Your awesomeness runneth over. Oh the First World War, boys, it came and it went
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Finger in the Sand
Posts: 18 (Mar 16, 2009 1:51 AM) |
*blushes and beams at the same time* Why, thank you. It's not at all what I planned to write (hopefully I can work that in later), but I'm quite
pleased with the way it turned out. You know, except for the mucking up of tenses I did a few times. *facepalm*
I'm well convinced that I'm actually British. Or at least partially so. I have lots of evidence to prove the same, use of British slang/phrases being just one. ;D |
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Ball Point Pen
Posts: 1112 (Mar 16, 2009 5:05 AM) Goose Feather Quill |
Now, as for the rest of you slackers...
*claps hands* Break's over, lads. Chop chop. Oh the First World War, boys, it came and it went
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Ball Point Pen
Posts: 1128 (Mar 21, 2009 7:10 AM) Ball Point Pen |
27 days? tsk.
i took a cop-out. hah!
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